I thought I'd write a juicy post
On how I'm turning into a ghost
With no time to self but yet almost
I'm finding time for me to unload
But here I am staring at the screen
Getting no such words that mean
What I should post in this box so clean
Except that 6 day working sucks (what the hell if it doesn't rhyme! it's true!)
I never thought I'd see a day
When my blog would be in such dismay
That I can't write oh please do say
Is it just meant to be this way
So many things I want to write
On dirty loos and driving fights
On issues I'm waiting to ignite
On climbing up a 10 storey flight
Yet words fail me and I know not
What to call this disease I've got
Or is it my brain this job is making rot
That a post I cannot even give a shot
If you think this poem is a mock
It truly sucks and doesn't rock
Let me say I can't recover from this shock
That I my dears have a writer's block
Shucks!
18 comments:
its actually cool!!!
u haven't lost it totally!!
guess will take some more time for that....
Zee... I shd say in the end u defntly made a good one.
ROFL @ Except that 6 day working sucks (what the hell if it doesn't rhyme! it's true!)
Or is it my brain this job is making rot - Is it not already?
nice actually!
wow !!!!!
this is one hell of a writer's block.
kya rhyming hai... wah wah.
extremely funny and expressive.
Good job zee... :)
under-promise and over-deliver :)
Writers loss, poets gain!
You know what?!!! You made this entertaining enough to not feel bad that you haven't been writing!! And you can actually rhyme!
It truly sucks
It definitely doesn't rock
But you are not your poem
So we'll still read you
Ten storey flights
We already heard about
Waiting to hear
About dirty loos
Try modern poetry
No arbit rhymes
And ancient rules
To worry about
BPSK
Its Funny!! n it does rhyme :)
this one is ultra coool..I tellu this
:)
:)
aiyo!
keep running up them flight of stairs... will do u a lot of good!
hehe.. you do not suck at all.. infact when you see my rhymes, your posts are lot bettaaa.
well i would rather call it bloggers block..not very original..but it does have alitertaion bit to it....
point on poetry...truth and feeligns matter more than ryhming..as u mentioned about ur sucky job!!
cheers ..good try..
Ayyyooo...6 day workin!!! U kiddin me!:O My heartfelt condolences :((
Haha. It's fun. :P The title, though, could've read 'I rock at poetry!'.
lol.
very quirky.
=)
it rhymes.. and its true..
thats called poetry isnt it..
this is no writers block.. :)
well i agree...it kinda sucks
try sumthin outside the a,b,a,b system...coz you write pretty well and have a good flow of thot...ofcourse that didnt make anyone a good poet,but then u may as well try :)
btw who the hell am i to comment
ciao
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